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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Jan 23, 2008 22:58:23 GMT -5
I am now officially out of ideas.
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Post by ycrney on Jan 23, 2008 23:04:26 GMT -5
Fight Club, what are we fighting about?  Fly, I just read your story, it is really good! Thank you for sharing that with me. And I couldn't help but notice certain parts about loving the city, breaking rules, and a bit of rebellion. Sort of fits us here as well, lol. Really, really good.  |
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Post by rachael on Jan 23, 2008 23:05:51 GMT -5
oops, got lost on myspace for a bit. I'll have to read back for your story Fly. I think i missed cf, leaving, sweet dreams to her. Did we lose Chayla?
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Jan 23, 2008 23:08:18 GMT -5
Fight Club, what are we fighting about? Fly, I just read your story, it is really good! Thank you for sharing that with me. And I couldn't help but notice certain parts about loving the city, breaking rules, and a bit of rebellion. Sort of fits us here as well, lol. Really, really good.  I dunno. Ayesa suggested it a couple months ago, and its been in my back pocket for awhile. Thank you! X has...issues. Yeah, that's the word I'm looking for. She gets a kick out of being the bad girl-which drives Oren up the wall, since he promised to protect her.  Sometimes I wonder why they haven't killed each other yet. I think we did lose Chayla.  |
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Post by ycrney on Jan 23, 2008 23:08:51 GMT -5
oops, got lost on myspace for a bit. I'll have to read back for your story Fly. I think i missed cf, leaving, sweet dreams to her. Did we lose Chayla? I think we did, and fly too. |
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Post by rachael on Jan 23, 2008 23:09:23 GMT -5
 I got to pop out now. Sweet dreams to you and yc. have an awesome Thurs.
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Jan 23, 2008 23:10:33 GMT -5
Night Rachael!
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Post by ycrney on Jan 23, 2008 23:11:46 GMT -5
Fight Club, what are we fighting about? Fly, I just read your story, it is really good! Thank you for sharing that with me. And I couldn't help but notice certain parts about loving the city, breaking rules, and a bit of rebellion. Sort of fits us here as well, lol. Really, really good. I dunno. Ayesa suggested it a couple months ago, and its been in my back pocket for awhile. Thank you! X has...issues. Yeah, that's the word I'm looking for. She gets a kick out of being the bad girl-which drives Oren up the wall, since he promised to protect her. Sometimes I wonder why they haven't killed each other yet. I think we did lose Chayla. I can see that she has issues, it is a story that people can relate too. But you have creating just enough to know that, but not necessarily to what extent. It makes you wan to continue to find out what it really is about the city, and what is making her tick. |
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Post by ycrney on Jan 23, 2008 23:14:09 GMT -5
 I got to pop out now. Sweet dreams to you and yc. have an awesome Thurs. Night Rachel, sweet dreams~ |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Jan 23, 2008 23:16:31 GMT -5
I dunno. Ayesa suggested it a couple months ago, and its been in my back pocket for awhile. Thank you! X has...issues. Yeah, that's the word I'm looking for. She gets a kick out of being the bad girl-which drives Oren up the wall, since he promised to protect her. Sometimes I wonder why they haven't killed each other yet. I think we did lose Chayla. I can see that she has issues, it is a story that people can relate too. But you have creating just enough to know that, but not necessarily to what extent. It makes you wan to continue to find out what it really is about the city, and what is making her tick.  She's an interesting character. She's very childish, in a way, but in other ways, she's even more mature than anyone else, and knows what's really going on. Oren's harder, because he's got his own issues, but can't really relate to X because his upbringing is very normal compared to hers. Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it. I want people to relate to them, even when they do things that are rather immoral. |
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Post by ycrney on Jan 23, 2008 23:17:41 GMT -5
Alright ladies, I guess I'm the last women standing tonight.  I'm gonna hit the sack...it's amazing how time is just sucked up when I log on here.  |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Jan 23, 2008 23:18:37 GMT -5
Night YC!
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Post by ycrney on Jan 23, 2008 23:19:46 GMT -5
I can see that she has issues, it is a story that people can relate too. But you have creating just enough to know that, but not necessarily to what extent. It makes you wan to continue to find out what it really is about the city, and what is making her tick.  She's an interesting character. She's very childish, in a way, but in other ways, she's even more mature than anyone else, and knows what's really going on. Oren's harder, because he's got his own issues, but can't really relate to X because his upbringing is very normal compared to hers. Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it. I want people to relate to them, even when they do things that are rather immoral. Oops, thought you were gone too. I really think you are on a good track with it. It almost sounds like my husbands and my relationship when we first got together, but reversed.  Now-a-days we're sure we have now switched roles again.  |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Jan 23, 2008 23:21:57 GMT -5
She's an interesting character. She's very childish, in a way, but in other ways, she's even more mature than anyone else, and knows what's really going on. Oren's harder, because he's got his own issues, but can't really relate to X because his upbringing is very normal compared to hers. Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it. I want people to relate to them, even when they do things that are rather immoral. Oops, thought you were gone too. I really think you are on a good track with it. It almost sounds like my husbands and my relationship when we first got together, but reversed. Now-a-days we're sure we have now switched roles again. ;D ;D ;D ;D Thanks. |
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Post by ycrney on Jan 23, 2008 23:23:32 GMT -5
Oops, thought you were gone too. I really think you are on a good track with it. It almost sounds like my husbands and my relationship when we first got together, but reversed. Now-a-days we're sure we have now switched roles again. ;D ;D ;D ;D Thanks.  Wish I could stay and chat, but it's hitting 11:30 and I know morning will come to fast. Night fly!  |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Jan 23, 2008 23:25:23 GMT -5
Night YC!
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Post by Joan S on Jan 24, 2008 9:32:19 GMT -5
Morning Ladies!
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Post by sjjo1973 on Jan 24, 2008 11:07:02 GMT -5
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Post by nlt on Jan 24, 2008 11:36:30 GMT -5
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Post by BL on Jan 24, 2008 15:48:45 GMT -5
afternoon chicas
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