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Post by UandMe on Feb 2, 2008 23:28:36 GMT -5
Thank you!  This is one of my favorite scenes(the other is Oren and his brother's ex-fiancee getting into a huge fight). Its just so beautiful and sweet on so many levels.  Yes!! It's 'intricate' writing... you've teased me now. I'm going to want more. See?!?!?  |
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Post by redjasper on Feb 2, 2008 23:29:00 GMT -5
I like that interpretation, Fly. I think I like the squiggles because they're not severe - not definitive. I have absolutely no confidence (lately) in real world interactions with men. It only works in dreams and fantastical thoughts. I'm waiting for something to change, but I'm not forcing it. Pfft, men.  I give up on them right now. Please, either ask me out or stop staring, its annoying. Ahhhh, if only I was 20 again. And had the inner 'I call you on your B.S' quotient that I have now... that would be sweet...  |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Feb 2, 2008 23:30:02 GMT -5
Fly has been teasing me with her novel for a bit now. #giggle# I like this part. Why does it not have anything to do with the plot? It definitely...oh, what is that word from college  ...develops the character. Sometimes, life throws in those random moments and it is good.  There are certain parts(beyond chapter seven) that give away huge plot details. Things kind of go to hell at a certain part... I know, I'm such a tease. But once I get this one little part done, I just might send you the whole thing. |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Feb 2, 2008 23:31:29 GMT -5
Pfft, men. I give up on them right now. Please, either ask me out or stop staring, its annoying. ;D ;D ;D ;D Fly, enjoy the staring b/c at some point, it will stop and you will wish they were staring.  Such is the foolishness of life. Why not ask them out? Because I'm not sure I'm interested. |
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Post by redjasper on Feb 2, 2008 23:31:40 GMT -5
Yes!! It's 'intricate' writing... you've teased me now. I'm going to want more. See?!?!?   You're being mean... Seriously, I take the little nuggets of good stuff when they come along. Thanks for the little passage tonight. I gotta get going... eyes are bleary and tomorrow will be a busy day working on my research proposal. Have a good evening and a happy Sunday!!  |
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Post by rachael on Feb 2, 2008 23:31:48 GMT -5
Hey girls!! Do I sense a Marty pic being posted in the asylum???
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Feb 2, 2008 23:32:02 GMT -5
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Post by UandMe on Feb 2, 2008 23:32:35 GMT -5
Pfft, men. I give up on them right now. Please, either ask me out or stop staring, its annoying. Ahhhh, if only I was 20 again. And had the inner 'I call you on your B.S' quotient that I have now... that would be sweet... Exactly! But Fly is wise. Maybe she will fair better than the rest of us.  My neighbor asked me today what advice I would give her son who is 27 and thinking about marriage. First, get past that point where you 'think' you are mature and secondly, realize there is no such think as a perfect marriage when people are not perfect. Damn, am I in a mood or what?!?!? ;D |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Feb 2, 2008 23:33:18 GMT -5
Night RJ! Sleep well!
Hi Isa! How are you? How do you always show up when I'm talking about my character, Raquel?
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Post by UandMe on Feb 2, 2008 23:35:04 GMT -5
See?!?!? You're being mean... Seriously, I take the little nuggets of good stuff when they come along. Thanks for the little passage tonight. I gotta get going... eyes are bleary and tomorrow will be a busy day working on my research proposal. Have a good evening and a happy Sunday!!  Oh, I hope you didn't think I was being mean!  Night RJ! |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Feb 2, 2008 23:35:43 GMT -5
Ahhhh, if only I was 20 again. And had the inner 'I call you on your B.S' quotient that I have now... that would be sweet... Exactly! But Fly is wise. Maybe she will fair better than the rest of us. My neighbor asked me today what advice I would give her son who is 27 and thinking about marriage. First, get past that point where you 'think' you are mature and secondly, realize there is no such think as a perfect marriage when people are not perfect. Damn, am I in a mood or what?!?!? ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D Me, wise? Pfft, I just don't have time for foolishness. Or something...but then again, I'm here. |
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Post by UandMe on Feb 2, 2008 23:36:08 GMT -5
Fly has been teasing me with her novel for a bit now.  I like this part. Why does it not have anything to do with the plot? It definitely...oh, what is that word from college ...develops the character. Sometimes, life throws in those random moments and it is good. There are certain parts(beyond chapter seven) that give away huge plot details. Things kind of go to hell at a certain part... I know, I'm such a tease. But once I get this one little part done, I just might send you the whole thing.  I'm worthy... |
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Post by rachael on Feb 2, 2008 23:36:24 GMT -5
Ahhhh, if only I was 20 again. And had the inner 'I call you on your B.S' quotient that I have now... that would be sweet... Exactly! But Fly is wise. Maybe she will fair better than the rest of us. My neighbor asked me today what advice I would give her son who is 27 and thinking about marriage. First, get past that point where you 'think' you are mature and secondly, realize there is no such think as a perfect marriage when people are not perfect. Damn, am I in a mood or what?!?!? ;D ;D ;DDon't ask me, I;m the one that has to chew gum and sit on her hands during the just cause why these two should not be married. ;D ;D ;D Hello Fly, Discussing your Raquel character? Donde? Doing ok. treadmilling. |
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Post by UandMe on Feb 2, 2008 23:38:06 GMT -5
Exactly! But Fly is wise. Maybe she will fair better than the rest of us. My neighbor asked me today what advice I would give her son who is 27 and thinking about marriage. First, get past that point where you 'think' you are mature and secondly, realize there is no such think as a perfect marriage when people are not perfect. Damn, am I in a mood or what?!?!? ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D Me, wise? Pfft, I just don't have time for foolishness. Or something...but then again, I'm here.  Are you saying we are foolish? ;D ;D ;D Hi Isa! How are you? Would you have taken a bottle of red from an attractive, flirtatious man who worked at an upscale grocery store? That is the million dollar question. |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Feb 2, 2008 23:38:55 GMT -5
Exactly! But Fly is wise. Maybe she will fair better than the rest of us. My neighbor asked me today what advice I would give her son who is 27 and thinking about marriage. First, get past that point where you 'think' you are mature and secondly, realize there is no such think as a perfect marriage when people are not perfect. Damn, am I in a mood or what?!?!? ;D ;D ;DDon't ask me, I;m the one that has to chew gum and sit on her hands during the just cause why these two should not be married. ;D ;D ;D Hello Fly, Discussing your Raquel character? Donde? Doing ok. treadmilling. Raquel=Oren's brother's ex fiancee. Hence why she gets to punch Oren in the face when he's being a jerk. |
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Post by UandMe on Feb 2, 2008 23:40:30 GMT -5
Exactly! But Fly is wise. Maybe she will fair better than the rest of us. My neighbor asked me today what advice I would give her son who is 27 and thinking about marriage. First, get past that point where you 'think' you are mature and secondly, realize there is no such think as a perfect marriage when people are not perfect. Damn, am I in a mood or what?!?!? ;D ;D ;DDon't ask me, I;m the one that has to chew gum and sit on her hands during the just cause why these two should not be married. ;D ;D ;D Hello Fly, Discussing your Raquel character? Donde? Doing ok. treadmilling. ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D One of these days, I am going to actually stand up and answer that ridiculous question... |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Feb 2, 2008 23:41:40 GMT -5
There are certain parts(beyond chapter seven) that give away huge plot details. Things kind of go to hell at a certain part... I know, I'm such a tease. But once I get this one little part done, I just might send you the whole thing.  I'm worthy... ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D Only if you really want to know. |
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Post by rachael on Feb 2, 2008 23:41:59 GMT -5
;D ;D ;D ;D Me, wise? Pfft, I just don't have time for foolishness. Or something...but then again, I'm here. Are you saying we are foolish? ;D ;D ;D Hi Isa! How are you? Would you have taken a bottle of red from an attractive, flirtatious man who worked at an upscale grocery store? That is the million dollar question. hmm, that is a toughy...I don't think so, cuz then he might think you're interested. Are you?? Course yesterday, I went through this dudes line at Walmart and he like always goes superfast at ringing up my stuff, kindof like showing off...but it makes me nervous thinking he aint ringin it up right. Yesterday, he asked me if I wanted him to give me some cash back and no one would know better and gave me this cornered smile look. I'm like NO thank you...smile, don't want either of to get into trouble. I left my cards behind after that and he had to catch me to give them to me, its like can't I get the heck out of herre faster? ;D ;D ;DI have to not go down his aisle agian. ;D |
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Post by UandMe on Feb 2, 2008 23:42:08 GMT -5
Raquel=Oren's brother's ex fiancee. Hence why she gets to punch Oren in the face when he's being a jerk. Wait, Raquel is Oren's brother's ex-fiancee?!?!? That's interesting... And who is on second base? |
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Post by rachael on Feb 2, 2008 23:42:34 GMT -5
;D ;DDon't ask me, I;m the one that has to chew gum and sit on her hands during the just cause why these two should not be married. ;D ;D ;D Hello Fly, Discussing your Raquel character? Donde? Doing ok. treadmilling. Raquel=Oren's brother's ex fiancee. Hence why she gets to punch Oren in the face when he's being a jerk.  I like Strong women. where is it? |
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