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Post by grumpypirate on Mar 15, 2008 0:34:09 GMT -5
I'm a bit late in posting this, but it's an assingment for english. We were to write our Daily Journal entry on Feb. 14th on a Valentines Day story. So, here it is.
His love for her burned greater than a ring of fire. He was forced to look at her every day, burning and pining over his love. He noticed her delicate brown hair, never out of place, her dress, clean and never wrinkled, and her bright blue eyes that twinkled in the lights. He first realized his love for her when he saw her sitting across from him. How that smile captivated him and caused his heart to light with a fire of a thousand suns. But, there love was never to be. For he was a toy soldier and she was just a China Doll sitting across from him in the toy store.
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Post by jillywilly65 on Apr 3, 2008 20:02:12 GMT -5
Aww this is sweet GP. I bet you could easily add more to this...I like it
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Post by grumpypirate on Apr 10, 2008 22:39:57 GMT -5
Thanks Jill!
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