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Post by kimberly on Oct 13, 2005 8:16:21 GMT -5
i wrote this last night, it is far from done, but it works, i think, it's called...stand tough or shut up
stop...take a listen you'll hear what you've been missin' stay....don't go i can make you believe what you didn't know
stand up...you gotta stand tough sit down...you gotta shut up all around the world you've had enough stand tough, shut up, you've got it rough
for now...don't fight i dont care if you're wrong or right im here...but wait say what you mean and mean what you say
try it now, it works real good say it loud, you know you should bite your lip...don't say a word let it go....i knew you would
stand up...you gotta stand tough sit down.....you gotta shut up all around the world you've had enough stand tough, shut up, you've got it rough
tell me now, i know you will sell me how you know i feel
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Post by Ceeje on Oct 13, 2005 11:29:35 GMT -5
Cool, Kimberly! Are you a singer/musician?
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Post by cimee on Oct 14, 2005 19:43:46 GMT -5
Cool Lyrics, it sounds like you want to say what is on your mind but your words may not be taken the right way, or that it may be used against you if you do speak up, so it is tougher to be quiet than to speak up sometimes. Also sounds like some entity is trying to convince you that this is the appropriate way to handle things even though you may not agree and it may not be right. This is just my interpretation of these lyrics. I like them!
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Post by kimberly on Oct 21, 2005 10:47:10 GMT -5
i never did finish the song cause i started writing another one....i have aadd..ha ha lol....just kidding. it is hard for me to sit still...thank you for your comments on my lyrics... after i wrote the lyrics...it sounded punk to me..but i didn't mean for it to...anyway not really a musician...just love to write....my brothers are amazing guitarists and they insire me to write... we wrote a song a few years ago that sounded almost like bulletholes...same idea....same sound...it kills me when that happens...but it is just a hobby..we enjoy the music....i can tear up the microphone given the right song...cimee2..you are right on the money with your interpretation of the song....maybe i will post more lyrics....if anyone is interested...
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