tammy
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Post by tammy on Oct 18, 2005 17:30:45 GMT -5
Longing For Yesterday
There is something I need to know Why can't I just let you go I should turn and walk away Forget the words of yesterday
Stop these silly, little dreams It's not as easy as it seems I beg my heart to let you go But it always answers no
Special is how you made me feel Alive, excited and oh so real I know you use to feel it too Don't want to say goodbye to you
I wish that you still cared for me That things were like they use to be But your feelings slipped away Even though I tried to make them stay
Sometimes I think I 'm over you That friendship will just have to do Then I remember all you've said to me I know this heart won't soon be free
The words you spoke changed my life Remembering them now cuts like a knife This lonely heart is filled with need I never knew the soul could bleed
- By Tammy Eichelberger
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Post by teakay on Oct 18, 2005 19:09:17 GMT -5
Thank you for posting this here. Would you like this to go into the November Fan Art page like your last one?
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suzy
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Post by suzy on Oct 18, 2005 21:14:25 GMT -5
Wow, what can I say? You are very talented, thank you for sharing... your poem is very touching and it brought tears to my eyes.
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Post by bellbottomblues on Oct 19, 2005 7:37:16 GMT -5
Tammy, your poem was very thought evoking. Great talent!
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tammy
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Post by tammy on Oct 19, 2005 16:53:32 GMT -5
Thankyou. I don't mind if it goes on the fan art page that would be great. I just didn't want to keep bothering you . Tammy
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Post by teakay on Oct 19, 2005 17:51:20 GMT -5
You aren't bothering me. I love to get the stuff people submit. It's neat seeing how talented and creative people are.
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