tammy
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Post by tammy on Dec 5, 2005 20:46:14 GMT -5
Beaten down, used and discarded Forgotten,alone and broken hearted Should have known it was to good to be true When I put all my faith in you I wish that I had only known I would have been better off alone
Is this the way it had to be Your cruel words drew blood from me Did you wish to cause me pain You succeeded with your cold disdain Aloow me the comfort of my tears For the lie of these past years
Why did it have to take so long Before I realized I had been wrong That our feelings were never the same To you I must have been just a game So now the time has come to part You dear friend, have broke my heart...
By... Tammy Eichelberger
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wildfire
18 and over
"The power to believe in yourself, is the power to change fate"
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Post by wildfire on Dec 5, 2005 21:46:47 GMT -5
Tammy... another good poem of yours. It is great that there is a lot of good writers/poets posting their work here. I love to read poetry, I just can't write any.
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Post by radioclash on Dec 6, 2005 21:44:40 GMT -5
Very moving
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tammy
18 and over
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Post by tammy on Dec 7, 2005 21:20:23 GMT -5
I can't seem to just sit down and write whenever I want.Only when I 'm feeling really bad then it just seems to happen .
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Post by leathertolaceluv on Dec 12, 2005 16:20:38 GMT -5
Hey Tammy Beautiful poem, hope you don't feel bad all the time.
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tammy
18 and over
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Post by tammy on Dec 15, 2005 17:27:01 GMT -5
LoL no , but I save the thingd I write when I do.
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