Ill never stop loving you (poem in rough draft!)

[brideofkain]

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I wrote the following poem for my fiance.


you make me smile
you make me laugh
your every thing ive ever wanted
your my dreams coming true
ill never stop loving you

sometimes i cry
but its not outta pain
its outta love
and longing to be with you again.
ill never stop loving you

together well make it
we can defeat anything
we are eachothers strength
i hope that's not to vain to say
but i know its true for me
what about you?
ill never stop loving you

it seems eternity
before i am legally your wife
but i cant wait for that day
or that night
ill never stop loving you

with a single touch of your hands
i fall more and more
with every kiss
you win me over again
ill never stop loving you

dont you see
your all ill ever need
im glad you finally accept that i only speak the truth
ill never stop loving you

take my hand my love
ill follow you anywhere.
take my hand love
ill never hurt you.
ill never stop loving you

your my love
your my light
your my flame
your the happiness that keeps me alive.
ill never stop loving you

i cherish you
and only you
i adore you
and only you
ill never ever stop loving you

[angel]

that is a very nice poem for your fiance'. When I have time, I usually just write down things for my husband about who he is and what he does for me and my children. We have two, a son, 4 and a daughter 2. Im 27, and he is 28 and we have been together 11 years. I let him read that poem and he liked it. But im not good at poetry, i just write what goes through my mind at that time. Anyway, just wanted to say that!!