mrsscreamer
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"A little more SCREAMING, a lot less singing" ;)
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Post by mrsscreamer on Jan 16, 2006 11:42:36 GMT -5
Ah great story!!! I love reading and writing fan fiction, although I'm a bit hesistant on writing it because with Marty...I don't think I'll be that good in capturing his dialoge and dialect to make it believable...and u do that very well. Good job!
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angel
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keep screamin' baby
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Post by angel on Jan 23, 2006 17:43:18 GMT -5
oh man, what is gonna happen now, i have just been reading as you are going. I am really interested. Hope you post the rest soon!!!!!!!!! by the way, you write really well!
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Post by njbohemian on Jan 23, 2006 18:38:59 GMT -5
Part 9
Billy watched Mikayla test some of the songs with Marty, Dino, and Bobby in silence for a half an hour while Mikayla nervously watched Billy stare at her during some of the songs like "Rain on the Brain" and "Eyes Can't See".
"Nice. Very nice," Billy replied when they finished the songs.
He walked over and stared at Mikayla for a good second.
"So you're the new hellraiser, huh?" Billy asked. Mikayla shrugged and replied, "Just doing my job, Billy." "Yeah. She's been doin' great putting up with us," Marty replied, glaring at Billy. "Oh. So she's not a hellraiser. Usually most chicks like her would be flashing us in the crowds and stuff."
Mikayla glared at Billy as he continued to talk.
"Thanks for filling in for me, Mik. But...I have a feeling that the guys and I can take it from here. Ain't that right, Marty?"
She glanced back at Marty who was in silence, not knowing what to say or how to answer his good friend and band mate. ----------------------------------- Hours later, Mikayla packed up her guitar and proceeded to leave the stage area with the same expression on her face the first day she met Marty at the bar. She didn't know whether she would see him or the band again, but she highly doubted it for herself.
"Mikayla? Mik?" She sighed and replied, "Marty, I don't want to hear it anymore." "Just wait up for one second..." "Again?" Mikayla turned and replied, "I told you already. I'm done. I don't want to hear anymore explanations from you or your recently needed band mate."
"This isn't an explanation, okay? I just want to talk to you," Marty said. "Yeah well, I'm through with talking anyway. I know when I'm not wanted. And I think Billy made that perfectly clear." "Could you forget about Billy for a second? I just want to talk. How many times do I have to repeat myself?"
Mikayla turned and replied, "As many times as you need because I don't want to hear it anymore. I told you that already."
After a brief silence, Marty asked her to stay.
"Why? To be a groupie? No thanks. Just go back to your band and I'll be on my way."
Marty watched her walk away solemnly while Mikayla's boiling anger started to simmer inside. She then stopped, sighed, and turned around to face him while his eyes stared at her in silence.
(To be continued...)
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Post by Ayesa86 on Jan 23, 2006 18:40:54 GMT -5
oh dear...
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angel
18 and over
keep screamin' baby
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Post by angel on Jan 23, 2006 18:55:31 GMT -5
yeah, same for me........
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Post by njbohemian on Jan 24, 2006 9:53:42 GMT -5
Part 10
(Hours later)
"Your girlfriend left already, huh?" Billy asked when Marty returned to the stage with some anger on his face. "You alright, bro?" Bobby asked him as Marty sat near the edge of the stage, facing the dark.
Billy walked over and sat next to him in silence.
"Where the hell were you the entire time?" Marty asked.
"Where else would I be?" Billy replied, "Away from all the crazy shit and having fun on my own."
"Dude," Marty started to yell out, "You had a responsibility, and you blew us off!" "Yeah man I know...management's pissed, right?" Billy asked.
"Not only that, Bill, but I'm pissed off as well!
"Let me guess," Billy replied, "you still got a thing for her, huh? Listen. We'll record a demo with her, send it out to Epic, and she can open up for us." "It's not about that. You show up unexpectedly and basically just kick her out..." "Hey man. I didn't kick her out. What's done is done, right? She was just a one time thing, okay?"
Marty grabbed him by the collar and glared at him.
"She was NOT a one time thing. She was a great band member and actually knew the material better in a second! Do me a favor and show some respect!" Billy glanced at him and replied, "Sorry. Could you let go of me now?"
Marty finally let go and walked off the stage, while Dino and Bobby's eyes focused in on Billy.
"He is right, man," Bobby replied, "She was pretty good. As much as I couldn't stand her for the time being, she was pretty damn good. Right, D?"
Dino nodded his head and replied, "I think I got a plan."
(To be continued...)
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angel
18 and over
keep screamin' baby
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Post by angel on Jan 24, 2006 12:16:20 GMT -5
Like the mystery!! still hangin! great job
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Post by njbohemian on Jan 27, 2006 19:46:09 GMT -5
Part 11
Mikayla spent most of her weeks in her apartment staring at the classifieds in numerous newspapers and going to interviews, where the interviewers didn't bother to call her back. It was a bit frustrating to find another job or gig just to make ends meet after Billy came back to take part in Marty's band once again.
She was about to open a bottle of Corona when someone knocked on her door. She threw the bottlecap opener down in disgust and walked over to answer it.
Her face was motionless when she found Dino standing in the doorway.
"How's it going?" He asked. Mikayla nodded and replied, "It's going. Not that it's that big of a deal to you." He stopped and replied, "Sorry for asking."
After a brief silence, he asked, "Mind if we talk for a bit?"
She shrugged and started to listen.
"The guys and I...we want you back. Go on a new tour and open for us." "Yeah right. Then you'll get rid of me again." "No, this is serious this time. You really proved yourself during the last couple of months, and that really showed us that you seriously meant business."
Mikayla shook her head and replied, "You're starting to sound like Marty." Dino went through his coat pocket and handed her a sealed envelope with her name on it. "Speaking of Marty, this is for you. It's dying to be opened by you from what I understand."
She sighed and opened it, reading through the contents until her eyes widened in shock. She stared up at Dino and asked if the recording contract was the real thing.
"It was all his doing, not mine. He was nice enough to play your demo for the execs and they liked it. They really wanna sign you."
Mikayla smiled and read through the contents again, before searching for a pen and something flat to write on.
"Where is Marty, by the way?" She asked.
Mikayla heard footsteps and saw him walk over to Dino's side and smile.
"So? You comin' back or what?" Marty asked. "Sounds like a good idea," Mikayla replied, forming a smile.
(To be continued...)
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angel
18 and over
keep screamin' baby
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Post by angel on Jan 28, 2006 18:02:00 GMT -5
great! yeah! everything is getting right now! good work and keep it coming, im wondering how all this is going to end!
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lena
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Post by lena on Jan 29, 2006 21:51:01 GMT -5
I think ....Dino "loves" Mikayla... If... both Marty and Dino love Mikayla...the story will be more... WOW! It sound like bizarre love triangle... I like sad ending anyway....
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angel
18 and over
keep screamin' baby
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Post by angel on Jan 31, 2006 19:37:17 GMT -5
ummm, thats interesting!
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Post by njbohemian on Jan 31, 2006 22:14:03 GMT -5
Part 12
(8 months later...)
"Can I ask you something?"
"Shoot," Marty replied, sitting down next to her while she tuned her guitar on the floor of the spare dressing room before one of the concerts.
Mikayla was on a new tour with the same band, the Lovehammers, and had a CD that was soon to be released. It felt great to be on the road with Marty and the rest of the guys, despite Billy's non-stop "Viva La Bam" esque antics.
"How'd you manage to do it?" She asked. "What?" "The contract, getting me to do the tour..." "Well, it was Dino's idea to do the contract."
She raised her eyes slightly and thought that it was Marty's idea.
"Well yeah. It was Dino's for a while but I kept resenting it for days. But I mean...I wanted to do something for you. After all the stuff you had to put up with..." "Meaning..." "Billy, the guys, I mean...everything. You really deserved it. You deserve this," Marty replied, placing an arm around her.
Mikayla looked away for a moment and said, "I guess I do deserve it, huh?" "Damn right you do."
(To be continued...)
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Post by Ayesa86 on Jan 31, 2006 23:00:49 GMT -5
hmmm...interesting. I'm really liking this nj^^
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angel
18 and over
keep screamin' baby
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Post by angel on Feb 1, 2006 13:05:08 GMT -5
same for me!
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angel
18 and over
keep screamin' baby
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Post by angel on Feb 19, 2006 17:48:08 GMT -5
still waiting, lol, you must be busy!!! lol
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Post by njbohemian on Feb 19, 2006 21:15:03 GMT -5
Busy, stuck and stressed, actually. I'm almost out of ideas!
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luxie
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Post by luxie on Feb 20, 2006 23:21:18 GMT -5
i'm sure itll still be awesome, nj if the past parts of the story are anything to by. its def worth the wait
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Post by grumpypirate on Feb 21, 2006 19:21:33 GMT -5
awsome story nj! keep up the good work!
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angel
18 and over
keep screamin' baby
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Post by angel on Feb 22, 2006 12:31:09 GMT -5
yeah you are doing great. just breathe and it will come to ya!!!
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Post by njbohemian on Mar 12, 2006 18:07:52 GMT -5
Sorry if it's been a while, but I finally have another part up. (And sorry if it sort of sucks.) -------------------------------------------------------------
Part 13
"Another show over," Mikayla replied, splashing some warm water on her face from the hotel bathroom.
She had been opening up for Marty and the band for six weeks straight and felt like she hardly ever got a break. Between the sound checks, rehersals and shows, it was almost as if she hardly ever had time to breathe...except for the half hour breaks and the end of her set.
Before she could climb into bed, she heard a knock at the door. Thinking that it was Marty, she sighed, walked over to the door and opened it.
"Hey," Dino said, almost in a daze. "Hey. What's up?" Mikayla asked. "Not much. The guys and I are hitting up the mini bar for some after show drinks..."
"Why don't you just hit the 'regular' bar?" "It's too damn crowded first of all and second, it's much more fun in the hotel room." "You serious?" "Hell yeah."
"I'd rather hit the bar," Mikayla replied, "There's probably a much better vibe down there." "Sure?"
Mikayla sighed and replied, "OK fine. I'll hit it up in the hotel room with you guys. Next time, you owe me a drink at the bar. No excuses." "Great. Let's go," Dino said, grabbing her hand and heading down the hall, giving Mikayla less time to lock up her room. ------------------------------------ Hours later, Mikayla stood in the back with Marty and watched the after party madness unfold in the hotel room and random people took shots and cheered others on.
"It's gonna get broken up sooner or later," Mikayla replied, sipping a mini bottle of alcohol. "Eh, it'll be worth it though," Marty replied, placing an arm around her. "You know, since you're by my side and all that." Mikayla smiled and felt his arm wrap around her shoulder almost tiredly.
"I gotta ask you a question," he asked her seconds later. "Is it an intelligent one or is it a stupid one?" She asked. "Shut up. It's not stupid in anyway. It's just a question."
She looked at him and replied, "Ok. Go ahead." "Are you...cheating on me?"
(To be continued...)
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