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Post by starcrossed on May 8, 2007 15:41:42 GMT -5
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Post by starcrossed on May 8, 2007 16:33:41 GMT -5
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Post by starcrossed on May 8, 2007 19:27:52 GMT -5
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 8, 2007 19:49:45 GMT -5
  SG
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Post by starcrossed on May 9, 2007 1:44:22 GMT -5
LOL...Hello Shawna! Thank you for the support...
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 9, 2007 3:39:46 GMT -5
STAY STRONG
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Stay strong my friend for all that your have written has brought inspiration to the world.
Stay strong is the wind that will carry you through the tough gales of black winds that stir within the tunnels of rocky hills.
Stay strong is the heart of your soul full of hopes that will carry you through the rest of your life.
Stay strong is what you need when all seems impossible to achieve and yet will come back in spades for you.
Stay strong my friend and I will always be there to help you stay strong...even when you think it's not apart of the world of possibilities.
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SG
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Post by starcrossed on May 9, 2007 3:47:41 GMT -5
That is perfect Shawna....  I love your new work! |
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 9, 2007 3:53:25 GMT -5
MY pleasure!  Glad ya liked it! S |
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Post by hammeredham on May 9, 2007 17:59:09 GMT -5
Sorry I hadn't gotten over here earlier to visit the fertile minds! Keep up the good creativity - while I'm not a poet myself, and had been trying to cultivate musicians here at mc.org, anytime when creativity is encouraged it's a good thing.
Nil Carborundum (if I got the spelling right)
HH
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 9, 2007 18:35:12 GMT -5
8-)Hi HH! glad ya could stop by and see us..feel free to come around anytime...thanks for the encouragement as well. Hope the cultivating of musicans goes well for ya. A Lot of talent out there.   ttyl Sunflower Gypsy(Shawna) |
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Post by starcrossed on May 10, 2007 2:05:05 GMT -5
Hello HH! Your welcome to join the thread any time you like...even if it is just to post a 'Hello'!.... That goes for everyone else who wants to post a work on this thread or say 'Hi'.
Anyway, I have been really busy lately, but I wanted to post something before my schedule really gets out of control. HC is coming fast and I have a lot of personal stuff to take care of before I leave, too.
Now, trying not to get to sentimental but....
If I haven't told you all enough here...You all amaze me with your talent and support for everyone's work. I am amazed each and every single day by the creativity on this board.
Personally, I know that it takes a lot to share your beautiful works here.
This was my first time sharing any of my writing with other people. I was so scared the first time I posted. I was afraid of negative comments or just being rejected. Yet, so many of you made me feel safe and comfortable.
All your kind words and encouragement helped me want to write and to share my thoughts. Sometimes I just can't help but share them and post away...sorry if it is annoying...LOL
I feel safe and inspired by all of you here. You all are like 'family' and that just makes me want to share my thoughts with you.
You all make this thread work so very well. You each have a distinct voice that shines through so clearly...and that is a rare and special gift.
I just wanted to take the time to thank all of you.Your works are very special to me. Thank you for sharing them.
Star
Given
Here is a blank canvas...
Nothing is written.
All emotions are hidden deep within your perfect soul,
Waiting to break free,
And to take life on the page.
You close your eyes...
Let the words come from the darkness.
In an instant,
You hand moves swiftly across the white surfaces.
All that you have felt... is now reborn.
Given to those around you as a gift.
Forget what other's may think.
The beauty of your words are true.
Forget what other's may say.
Given to yourself as a reflection of wisdom from another time in life.
All that you can imagine can be reality on a simple piece of paper.
In an instant,
You have created a precious work.
You close your eyes...
Find a bright new world surrounding you.
All emotions are soaring from your heart and mind,
Completely free,
And brought to life before you
All your words are written and lay before you.
The canvas is full.
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 10, 2007 3:34:56 GMT -5
AMAZING stuff Star! Your best work yet! Your muse must have send some serious vibes to ya this time! Thanks for sharing this with us! SG  |
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Post by starcrossed on May 11, 2007 20:06:50 GMT -5
Thank you very much Shawna. Thank you for taking the time to share your works on this thread too.
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 11, 2007 20:21:18 GMT -5
My pleasure Star! I really enjoy posting them! SG |
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Post by starcrossed on May 13, 2007 0:38:53 GMT -5
Just feeling creative....
Sands of Time
You see what you want to believe...
Believe everything just to fit in.
Never being honest with yourself,
Yet knowing inside...
Your hollow within.
Let the past come fast,
Taking you over in a wave.
Forget what you wished for,
You make your own fate.
Want others to never dream of brighter day.
Seduced by an image,
You want other's to pay.
Leave them torn apart,
To you it is another day.
Let the sands of time sweep them up,
In a fierce desert storm.
These choices are all yours.
Jealousy and spite...
Left the taste of power in your mouth,
Made you thirst for more.
Climbed over all the bodies...
Never cared for other's to stand out.
Blistering winds,
That is what your soul is all about.
So, when the winds do change,
And you are left standing alone,
Will you be ready to face the storm?
Let the past come fast,
Taking you over in a wave.
Forget what you wished for,
You make your own fate.
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 13, 2007 5:25:37 GMT -5
Girl! You are right on POINT! with this little jewel  Those words are just flowing and forsure glowing with little visual pictures along the way! Thanks for sharing it with us...I know with ya gettin' ready for HC that time is short for sharing your gems...But I just wanted to let ya know that ya have a keeper with this one! Peace Love and Harmony SG |
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 13, 2007 14:37:18 GMT -5
The Eternal Dreamer Interlace the love we gave...it was not in haste that you gave me faith...my heart will never erase the love traits...that are full of grace. Dreams abound and love has found waves that sound like the birds in the clouds. Visions I found in the love that rained down upon my eyes and now you are here to stay and your love can never be erased. Dreamer sing me a song and all that is within my heart will never make me lose faith in your love and your passion...And it will always be here for the asking..for it is you that will be dancing around my heart...that is pounding with the peace and a inner release that will last. Dreamer you are the core to my soul and all the love will always be bold and never to unfold from my heart...because we will never be apart. ************************ Peace SG  |
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Post by starcrossed on May 13, 2007 17:26:45 GMT -5
Precious
For all that you do is precious...
I lay down by your side and simply stare at you in wonder.
I place into memory
Every curve of your body.
Touch you gently,
With the soft strokes from my mind.
Watch the moonlight cast it's shadows across your face,
Dancing playfully with a angelic grace.
The beauty that God has placed in you,
Amazes me in every single way.
I would stay here forever by your side.
Give you pure love and devotion,
Until it is my last breath.
For all that you do is precious...
And I love you even more.
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Post by starcrossed on May 13, 2007 17:29:16 GMT -5
LOL...Hello Shawna! I just noticed you new work...Great one!!! I just ran in to post something small and hit reply I guess to soon. Look's like we both have romantic poems on the mind...LOL
I have to go...still have a bunch to do today! Bye!
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 13, 2007 17:54:41 GMT -5
Yours was GREAT as well...Yep I guess with HC come at yours/everyones ankles...inspiration is abound us! SG
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What ? 
Sh*t... 
I found another typo... 
Alright, I fixed it... 
