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Post by redjasper on Jul 9, 2007 1:55:23 GMT -5
Cool, Cheza. The current storyline is really moving along. Now I'm curious about how 'the war' affects all these characters. Did the older sister leave because of the war? Does Dragon's turf have something to do with it? I'm sure we'll find out soon... I'll be looking for the next part....  |
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Post by redjasper on Jul 9, 2007 15:31:28 GMT -5
Patience dear, patience...all in good time. Remember in the first installment it said Crystal ran off after the deaths of her mom & dad because she couldn't handle it all - Joe was 12 then and her age was not stated. Where she went and whether or not it has anything to do with the Dragon you'll have to wait and see. I'm very patient actually.  Looking forward to the next bit...  |
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Post by grumpypirate on Jul 9, 2007 23:51:13 GMT -5
Hee hee, I love the goonies. Sean Astin, Mikey, lookes exactly like he does now. Hee hee *giggle*
Well, I'll try and work on it next week. I'm away from my computer right now, so I can't do anything with it until I get home.
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Post by jillywilly65 on Jul 10, 2007 17:49:01 GMT -5
Cheza I love this story . It pulled me in right away. I haven't even thought about back stories of the characters at all? So many kids live their grandparents today that I didn't even think twice as to why? Duh I guess I am slow. It is all coming together though and I like it.  Holy Cow lightning just set off a neighbors car alarms. I better get offline til this storm stops  Jilly |
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Post by bostongirl on Jul 10, 2007 20:32:17 GMT -5
Cheza - I have been away for a while and not able to read this. In a way, I am glad that I got to read it all at once. The story line is very good and the characters very real and interesting. I am not thinking about the plot too much. So far, the plot has kept me interested and engaged. Looking forward to more.
Thanks for sharing,
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Post by jillywilly65 on Jul 11, 2007 17:44:49 GMT -5
Loving it so far
I do have a complaint though
Crystal is coughing because of her cigs right?
Please don't kill her off??
This is really a comment not a complaint
More please
Jilly
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Post by jillywilly65 on Jul 11, 2007 18:56:28 GMT -5
Oh Cheza if you've ever smoked, and I have ,the natural progression to a raspy smokers voice is Always followed by coughing and sometimes hacking too. it is such a pleasant experience.  I can see how you would think that I am paranoid, but every story from Fly's to GP's seems to end in this sad romantic end...death  I am hoping for a lighter end thats all. Does that make sense? Jilly |
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Post by jillywilly65 on Jul 11, 2007 22:02:51 GMT -5
I love this story and am totally hooked
:-)
Jilly
can't hardly wait for more................
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Post by grumpypirate on Jul 11, 2007 23:52:03 GMT -5
Love it Cheza! Simply love it! I want to know what Crystal and Drake are up to? Hmm.....plotting?
Hee hee, Jilly, do I need to write a happy story for you?
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Post by jillywilly65 on Jul 12, 2007 0:14:11 GMT -5
Oh GP could ya? That would be swell  |
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Post by grumpypirate on Jul 12, 2007 0:23:45 GMT -5
I'll work on it. That new story may just end up a very happy ending/story.
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Post by blueeyz on Jul 16, 2007 1:59:42 GMT -5
I'm hooked and intrigued as well. Can't wait to read more. I am curious, however, how Crystal wasn't found even though she's been close by all along. Or has she really been there all along? Is she over 18? Guess these are questions that will eventually get answered....
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Post by bostongirl on Jul 16, 2007 10:50:12 GMT -5
Ok, I m up to date. I just know you were waiting for me ;D ;D. It is a really good story. Waiting for the next installment. Great work.  |
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Post by keysunset on Jul 16, 2007 21:12:56 GMT -5
Hi Cheza! I'm hooked as well, though as with some of the others here it seems like there are SOOOOO many questions ... hmmm, maybe that's your point huh?!
Looking forward to another installment to hopefully start to bring some of it together and make the story flow better for me.
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Post by jillywilly65 on Aug 16, 2007 22:20:55 GMT -5
What happened??? where's the rest of the story Ms Cheza???
:-(
Jilly
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Post by jillywilly65 on Aug 22, 2007 22:37:07 GMT -5
Lord
grant me patience and I want it right Now!!
So many stories, so little time
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Jilly
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Sept 28, 2007 21:08:50 GMT -5
Very interesting...I'd like to see where this story is going. Its an interesting plot, that's for sure.
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Post by bostongirl on Oct 3, 2007 23:50:58 GMT -5
Yes!!!! What a treat to find a new chapter.
Hmmmm - more questions than answers here, lol!!!! great story line. I am curious about Crystal. And the relationship of Sasha and Dragon....i like to guess about things, but will wait.
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Post by keysunset on Oct 5, 2007 22:52:39 GMT -5
Wow, Cheza! Very nice.
Yes more questions, but if there weren't, we wouldn't be saying, "PLEASE post the next installment soooooon!"
Thanks, Cheza.
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Post by jillywilly65 on Oct 5, 2007 23:08:48 GMT -5
 love it 
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