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Post by grumpypirate on Oct 7, 2007 22:16:43 GMT -5
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bostongirl
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Hope - the only cure all
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Post by bostongirl on Oct 13, 2007 19:02:25 GMT -5
CHeza - you are so great with the details. really interesting. i am looking forward to seeing how some of these characters and the plot unfold. Nice work  - Boston |
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Post by jillywilly65 on Oct 13, 2007 19:52:11 GMT -5
Hmm? Did Crystal recognize her own brother? Did she know it was him? Was she sober? Had he changed alot since they last saw each other?
So many questions..............
Don't leave me hanging to long :-)
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Post by grumpypirate on Oct 15, 2007 22:42:18 GMT -5
Awww hope you get better soon! *hugs* Great chapter! Can't wait for more!!!
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Post by jillywilly65 on Oct 18, 2007 11:44:00 GMT -5
The suspense is building..cool stuff Cheza :-)
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HY
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Post by HY on Oct 18, 2007 13:02:33 GMT -5
I haven't had a chance to read your installments for a while, Cheza. I'm so glad I came back to catch up. The story is really developing and I love the way the characters are being built slowly - gives everyone a chance to see if the character they are building up in their minds matches the one that you are building. Love it! Definitely will come back more often to check for installments. |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Oct 18, 2007 13:09:02 GMT -5
Very interesting...I'm looking forward to what happens next.
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Post by blueeyz on Nov 13, 2007 3:06:11 GMT -5
It's coming along well.....I like your details that help your reader get to know the characters i.e. Joe's observation of Mike's speed despite his asthma.
I'm curious why Crystal was never found. Did she just recently return to Justice? Has anyone else recognized her?
Questions all answered in due time, I guess! Great job!
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Post by jillywilly65 on Dec 6, 2007 21:22:33 GMT -5
long time no post.
Where story go?
:-(
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Post by jillywilly65 on Apr 3, 2008 19:21:21 GMT -5
Good stuff but I am ready for more, I am ready for a long read haha keep it coming girl!!  |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Apr 3, 2008 20:19:10 GMT -5
Canned spinach? I'm so glad I'm not aquainted with that.
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bostongirl
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Post by bostongirl on Apr 3, 2008 21:30:21 GMT -5
Canned spinach...hahahahaha. I second the vote for more, more, more of this story.
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Post by redjasper on Apr 4, 2008 23:34:56 GMT -5
She's baaaaa-aaaack!!!! Love it - love it - love it, Cheza!! You know what? I went back and re-read the whole story - mainly because my mind is so sieve-like and I forgot some basic things. It was cool to do that -- it reminded me that you've stirred up lots of curiosity for me with this story. Especially about Sasha... what's up with her??? Can't wait for more...  |
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Post by jillywilly65 on Apr 8, 2008 0:22:42 GMT -5
Yay more story Cheza woot woot  Thanks! |
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Post by FlyIntoOblivion on Apr 9, 2008 1:07:11 GMT -5
Very interesting...cute kid.^^
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Post by jillywilly65 on Apr 10, 2008 20:43:07 GMT -5
Yeah Addy's Mom and Crystals Gramps both need to be B-Slapped back to reality!! Argh!
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Post by grumpypirate on Apr 23, 2008 22:45:27 GMT -5
YAY! I do love reading this story!
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bostongirl
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Post by bostongirl on Apr 25, 2008 12:59:33 GMT -5
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Post by redjasper on Apr 25, 2008 22:25:24 GMT -5
Thanks, gp & bostongirl. The next chapter will deal with someone I feel some of you have viewed in a different light *ahem, I'm looking at you RJ* than I planned. I've started drafting it, but it's Relay For Life week here...and I'm a team captain AND the online chair...so I'm a wee bit swamped between that and school right now. If I get a chance I may post a snippet of the next section before the weekend is out. I can't wait to see what's coming, Cheza!! Hope your Relay week has been going well.  |
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Post by dustyblue25 on Apr 26, 2008 0:04:27 GMT -5
Enjoying your story Cheza. I am looking forward to your next installment.
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