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Post by grumpypirate on Jun 6, 2007 10:36:57 GMT -5
YAY CHEZA!!! I'm Super proud of you!! Making it to 5,000!!!!! I can't wait to hear some of your work!
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Post by grumpypirate on Jun 7, 2007 17:06:46 GMT -5
Ok, you've got me interested. Wonderful writting. You're a skilled writter and I can't wait to hear what you have next in store!
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Post by bostongirl on Jun 7, 2007 19:25:45 GMT -5
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Post by HY on Jun 8, 2007 14:56:49 GMT -5
Good story line, Cheza. You've got me hooked.
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Post by starcrossed on Jun 16, 2007 17:00:06 GMT -5
Your writing Cheza!!! You finally found time!!! Great work!!!
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Post by HY on Jun 26, 2007 16:10:52 GMT -5
I like the way this is going, Cheza. Really well written. Anxiously waiting for more.
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Post by jillywilly65 on Jun 26, 2007 21:47:18 GMT -5
Okay now Cheza you and GP are being mean!! Writing this good stuff, pulling us in and then..........then..... Poof you leave us hangin!!!  waddup? Jilly |
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Post by starcrossed on Jun 27, 2007 1:38:55 GMT -5
Great work Cheza!!!! I am proud of you...I can't wait for more!!!
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Post by grumpypirate on Jun 27, 2007 23:19:46 GMT -5
I LOVE it Cheza!!! Can't wait for more...hee hee....I did write more on mine....hee hee, but I'm not too sure about it...
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Post by jillywilly65 on Jun 28, 2007 18:06:21 GMT -5
Dang Gramps is quite the smooth operator or Annie is a gold-digger geez!!!!!!!!!!!! Just messing with ya Cheza ;D ;D ;D I like it alot and found myself thinking Joe is dumb for wanting to venture into the hood alone..YIKES  please don't kill him off??? Jilly |
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Post by HY on Jun 29, 2007 13:37:25 GMT -5
I really like the story line - can't wait to read more.
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Post by keysunset on Jun 29, 2007 20:56:47 GMT -5
Thanks, Cheza! I'm enjoying reading your story. And, yeah, when is there going to be more ...  |
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Post by grumpypirate on Jun 30, 2007 0:36:32 GMT -5
Awww....I think gramps has a crush!! Great one Cheza! Can't wait for more!
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Post by redjasper on Jul 3, 2007 23:18:05 GMT -5
Wow, Cheza, I'm hooked on this now!!! Your characters are so interesting. Well done!! Can't wait for more instalments...  |
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Post by blueeyz on Jul 4, 2007 0:53:06 GMT -5
Your story is very engaging! I look forward to reading more.
-Blueeyz5
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Post by dustyblue25 on Jul 4, 2007 1:26:24 GMT -5
Cheza, I am also enjoying your story.  |
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Post by redjasper on Jul 6, 2007 22:01:44 GMT -5
I love it, Cheza!!! More please...
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Post by blueeyz on Jul 7, 2007 16:22:50 GMT -5
Awesome, Cheza. Great way to leave us hanging too! I am able to visualize the location and characters easily -- you're doing a great job! |
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Post by keysunset on Jul 8, 2007 8:21:12 GMT -5
I'm definitely hooked into the story, Cheza. I find myself wanting more descriptors about the characters, their environment, etc.
The other thing that I'm not too clear about is why Joe has such a "need" to find and thank this girl who helped him. I guess something in the setup of the story, or the way I'm reading it, hasn't made that "picture" for me yet.
I'm looking foward to more installments!
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Post by grumpypirate on Jul 9, 2007 0:00:22 GMT -5
OMG OMG OMG OMG!! MORE!!
Yikes! finding a long lost sister.
For some reason it's reminding me of THe Goonies! LOL, it must be the whole Mike thing. LOL.
Great piece of work!! Can't wait for more! YOu really are a brillinat writter Cheza!
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