Got Poetry?II

[starcrossed]

LOL... Well I don't know anything about "Martybucks", but I can help take care of the reputation points issue. Let me start you out with your first one, the second time around

[bostongirl]

Ok, I am not quite at my vacation destination point yet, but in anticipation of that very romantic place, a little something for the heart.

Say It

The three most important words in the universe
We all desperately want to hear
The purest most amazing gift
To whisper in someone’s sweet ear

Sacred words that should not be said lightly
For they are entwined in honor and trust
When in earnest should be given freely
Three words that define life’s quest

We have spent so much time dancing
Not wanting to expose our true thoughts
We use every other expression
But have not dared to spill our hearts

Tomorrow is always a mystery
Never knowing what each moment will bring
I want you to know my true feelings
I want you to know everything

With angst I muster the courage to tell you
For no one should be embarrassed to say
Those three words that mean everything
Baby, I love you in the purest of ways

[starcrossed]

I really should be asleep, but lately my old habits have kicked in and I am staying up way too late at night (or morning...LOL). However, I am glad that I did. I had a chance to come here and read your new poem Boston

Excellent piece... I love romance. 'Love'... such a simple word, yet a very complicated emotion. It lives as wild and free as the eagles that soar high in the skies. I always think it is a blessing when two people share that emotion for each other.

Thank you for sharing that poem with us Boston. And, once more... safe travels to you and those sharing your journey.

(* Fixed typo... before Blue brings out the red pen...LOL )

[bostongirl]

Thanks Steph, I am glad that you liked it. Yes, such important words and yet we so often are afraid to say them in fear of....what?

I fly at 9 am in the morning. I too have fallen back into bad late night hbits. Thanks for the good wishes. Have a good week.

Liz

[starcrossed]

Have a great trip Boston...

I think sleep is over rated...LOL No. I have always found some comfort in the quietness that comes with the night. It is a different pace for me... and I have time to just think to myself. During the day, I am running around between tasks and just being 'Mom'. There is hardly any time for my mind to wander off. So, most of my writing has always been written in the night.

You have a great week as well. Thanksgiving is coming I am cooking this year, here at my parents house. Last year I was in Chicago, trying to catch snowflakes in my mouth, while waiting for a taxi in front of Joe's Sports Bar...LOL

So, my parents requested that I be put to work this year. I don't mind. My Grandma Lucy made our dinner every year, until she passed on when I was 9 years old. After that, I took over. She had raised me beside her in the kitchen, and taught me how to cook since I was really young. Having never wrote down a single recipe, I was shown how to cook her dishes from memory.

Thanksgiving dinner is simple for me to make at this point. It is also something that I feel very blessed to be able to do for my family. And, it reminds me of my Grandmother... I miss her and my grandfather every single day. They always seemed to understand me... even when no one else did or tried to.

[cgs2007]

wow good job guys! i have had some catching up to do if i say so myself!! alot of poems since i last posted. sorry i havent had much time for my own creativity lately with school starting to get hectic and all. but i was able to come across this most amazing song today.... i find it fits very well now a days.... so here it is:

"If Today Was Your Last Day" By: Nickleback

My best friend gave me the best advice
He said each day's a gift and not a given right
Leave no stone unturned, leave your fears behind
And try to take the path less traveled by
That first step you take is the longest stride

If today was your last day
And tomorrow was too late
Could you say goodbye to yesterday?
Would you live each moment like your last?
Leave old pictures in the past
Donate every dime you have?
If today was your last day

Against the grain should be a way of life
What's worth the prize is always worth the fight
Every second counts 'cause there's no second try
So live like you'll never live it twice
Don't take the free ride in your own life

If today was your last day
And tomorrow was too late
Could you say goodbye to yesterday?
Would you live each moment like your last?
Leave old pictures in the past
Donate every dime you have?
Would you call old friends you never see?
Reminisce old memories
Would you forgive your enemies?
Would you find that one you're dreamin' of?
Swear up and down to God above
That you finally fall in love
If today was your last day

If today was your last day
Would you make your mark by mending a broken heart?
You know it's never too late to shoot for the stars
Regardless of who you are
So do whatever it takes
'Cause you can't rewind a moment in this life
Let nothin' stand in your way
Cause the hands of time are never on your side

If today was your last day
And tomorrow was too late
Could you say goodbye to yesterday?

Would you live each moment like your last?
Leave old pictures in the past
Donate every dime you have?
Would you call old friends you never see?
Reminisce old memories
Would you forgive your enemies?
Would you find that one you're dreamin' of?
Swear up and down to God above
That you finally fall in love
If today was your last day

[starcrossed]

Hello there stranger I was starting to worry about you.

It's good to see you on the thread, and no worries about not posting something 'original'. Get through all your school stuff first, and whenever you have a chance, feel free to post.

In the meantime, thank you for sharing that with us. Some lyrics are very much like poetry... that was one of them.

Take care... and best wishes on all your studies and upcoming exams. I am sure that you will do great!

[cgs2007]

thanks steph! i figured you guys would appriciate that one very much so! i know i did.

i only have about a week and a half left of school so i will be done pretty soon! im excited about that.

[starcrossed]

Good for you Just keep focused forward... You will soon be passed all the stress and drama. Take each moment as it comes and you will be done with school (at least for a while...LOL).

[blueeyz]

Nov 22, 2008 20:58:10 GMT -5 @starcrossed said:

LOL... Well I don't know anything about "Martybucks", but I can help take care of the reputation points issue. Let me start you out with your first one, the second time around

Thanks Steph! Really....no Martybucks? Martymoney? What about Martymiles?

OK, enough of my silliness.

Liz -- beautiful poem!

Yes, the late hours of the night are more conducive for me as well. But my creativity does not operate on my schedule, nor does it even seem aware of a clock. LOL. So, here's something I just wrote:

Return

I want to return
To the place where I was before.
I didn’t think I’d ever look back
With regret
Once I walked out the door.

I want to feel
The way that I used to.
My head clear
My heart free
Only wishing to be with you.

It seemed right at the time.
These plans, these visions
All made sense in my mind.
But darkness and loneliness were waiting by the roadside;
Not what I was expecting to find.

Lying naked and vulnerable
On this stone-covered street.
I know that there’s light
But it’s hard to open my eyes
And I struggle to get back on my feet.

I am walking home….
A stranger in a familiar place.
When I knock on the door
Who will you see?
Will you even recognize my face?

I want you to let me in
Again
And lock the door so I can’t get out.
This is how you can set me free;
This is what my love’s about.

[starcrossed]

LOL @ Blue... uh... I don't have any Martybucks, Martymoney, or Martymiles... but, I could get you a Walmart gift card if you like? That has at least the word 'Mart' in it

Nice work too Blue. Creativity rocks anytime it comes... no matter what time of day (or night) it is.

[blueeyz]

Nov 25, 2008 14:32:05 GMT -5 @starcrossed said:

LOL @ Blue... uh... I don't have any Martybucks, Martymoney, or Martymiles... but, I could get you a Walmart gift card if you like? That has at least the word 'Mart' in it

How thoughtful, Steph! I also do most of my grocery shopping at "SaveMart," so a gift card for there would work too!

Here's one for the holiday:

Thanksgiving

Be careful you don’t end up burning the turkey--
You’ll wind up with something that’s tough like beef jerky.

If you’re anything like me, when it comes to the stuffing
You’ll eat WAY too much and disastrously puffing

Up like a silly ol’ puffer fish.
But what can I say…
It’s my favorite dish.

Marshmallows covering the candied sweet potatoes;
Green beans, yellow corn,
And my specialty – stewed tomatoes.

Warm, fresh rolls with butter,
Jellied cranberry sauce,
Mashed potato mountains
With the gravy spilling off.

I’m wobbling from all that gobbling
But I’ve got room for pie;
What…who wants a big piece?
I should take it? Don’t be shy?

Despite all the indulging
I’ll remember to give thanks;
And oh yes…there’s that other thing --
I mustn’t forget to wear LOOSE pants!

[starcrossed]

LMAO... Terrific Thanksgiving poem Blue Thank you for sharing it with us.

[blueeyz]

Thank you, and have a great Thanksgiving!!

[starcrossed]

Your welcome Blue And, I would like to wish you and your family a very Happy Thanksgiving too.

[jillywilly65]

Happy Thanksgiving Ladies!
Wonderful works as usual, Blue you and Star had me and Boston had
me all emotional and then Blue you go and throw in your "Thanksgiving"
poem..girl you are so gifted...loving the funny side of your work.
Have a good rest of the week and I will try harder to get over here.
It sure is worth the trip.

hugs

[bostongirl]

Thanks Blue - glad that you liked it. Three words that should never be left unsaid.

You have been busy lately. I really liked Return and THanksgiving was upbeat. We could all use that.

Hope everyone has a great THanksgiving!!!

Liz

[IWOmusic]

Blue, I had a good laugh reading your Thanksgiving lol
Brilliant !
ps. stewed tomatoes...

[blueeyz]

Ah, but IWO, you've never tried MY stewed tomatoes!

Thank you ladies, and I wish you and your families a very happy Thanksgiving!

[starcrossed]

LOL@ Blue and Iwo.... I kinda have to agree with Iwo... I am not a stewed tomato fan, but then again the way you make yours might change my mind. Who knows...

Everyone have a wonderful Thanksgiving holiday... no matter how you spend the day or what you eat