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Post by blueeyz on Dec 7, 2008 16:14:21 GMT -5
Tis the season for me to write yet another goofy holiday poem! This time I got a little 'Weird Al Yankovic-ish'.....I call this one "Christmas Tree," and it's modeled after Marty's "Trees." So make sure you've got the tune of "Trees" in your head as you're reading it.
Hope you like it! If not, please don't throw TOO many tomatoes at me!!
Christmas Tree (my Christmas version of "Trees")
I don’t wanna go through Christmas Without you getting a surprise And I have got it all wrapped up Don’t shake the box, that’s how it’s got to be.
It’ll be you and me Under the Christmas tree And Santa will give us some presents. It’ll be you and I Watching the sky For a sleigh with reindeer flying down from the heavens.
We give, and we receive In a season that brings us together We eat more candy then we’ve ever dreamed And get a stomach ache we fear will last forever.
It’ll be you and me Under the Christmas tree And Santa will give us some presents. It’ll be you and I Watching the sky For a sleigh with reindeer flying down from the heavens.
Yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah We got one shot So let’s start unwrapping Yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah yeah You’re gonna love what I got For you…..Christmas is finally here!
It’ll be you and me Under the Christmas tree And Santa will give us some presents. It’ll be you and I Watching the sky For a sleigh with reindeer flying down from the heavens.
I know there’s more for us in Santa’s sleigh If we stay awake, there’ll be stuff to take I know there’s more for us in Santa’s sleigh Can we stay awake, can we stay awake?
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Post by bostongirl on Dec 7, 2008 21:39:27 GMT -5
Bravo, Bravo!!!! We can always count on Blue to set the mood for our holidays. I think we need to decorate this place
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Post by IWOmusic on Dec 7, 2008 22:16:00 GMT -5
Blue, you're funny!!! I think at one point we all sang this song with "our own" lyrics to it LOL
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Post by starcrossed on Dec 8, 2008 18:53:08 GMT -5
LOL... Love the new work Blue
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Post by blueeyz on Dec 8, 2008 19:39:54 GMT -5
Thanks ladies!!
Boston, I really like that festive reindeer!
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Post by cgs2007 on Dec 8, 2008 20:47:06 GMT -5
" The One"
I see all the girls, in the tv screens movies and magazines.
i can never look like them. that will never be me. but thats all you see
a heart so full but no one to give it to this isnt how its supposed to be
someone to love you someone to want you someone to hold you
what once was reality is now a distance dream fading with the light
in a world surrounded but still alone just needing one
the one who loves her with her flaws and short comings the one whos heart skips a beat with just a smile.....
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Post by blueeyz on Dec 9, 2008 11:58:51 GMT -5
I like this one very much, Christine. Thank you for sharing it.
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Post by starcrossed on Dec 10, 2008 0:25:12 GMT -5
Nice work Christine Here is one from me... it's dark... but, I am just coming out of a phase of writer's block. AloneRunning colors, On the surface of a pond. Reflections of a past, That still bleeds. Thoughts... lost. Temptations... all around. This is not the way, Life was ever meant to be. Sadness, Is blessed in mercy. Fear, Is grief unknown. Wisdom speaks to a deaf man, And I alone grow weak. Wandering through illusions, Made by a frail mind. Torn heart, Left alone. I am this, And nothing at all. Consoled by madness. Words fall, From cracked lips in harsh winds. A soul... alone. Images, Painted in my mind. Scared, To believe. Believe, I am scared. Daylight, Walks into darkness. The world does not see... I am alone.
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Post by cgs2007 on Dec 10, 2008 0:30:53 GMT -5
good work steph! i love it.. i have been feeling a little down lately... today was my last day at school and im a little sad to go.. and i have been dealing with some emotional stuff lately (you know).....
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Post by starcrossed on Dec 10, 2008 2:48:45 GMT -5
Life isn't easy Christine... although, many people wish it was at least simple. I have had a lot of stuff going on too in my life and around me. I hate drama (believe it or not) and try to keep my life as simple as I can, but sometimes things just don't go they way we plan. Just have faith and keep looking forward. Things pass.... it all is a matter of time. I will keep you in my thoughts young lady. {{{Hugs}}} ~Steph
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Post by starcrossed on Dec 10, 2008 2:49:43 GMT -5
Oh... and I am glad that you liked my poem Thank you.
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Post by bostongirl on Dec 10, 2008 10:45:37 GMT -5
Christine and Steph - good works from both of you. Hope you both are doing better. Life is a roller coaster ride, that is for sure. Just hold on tight and wait. Embrace the good, and learn from the not so good. Well, at least try . I try to find something to put a smile on my face each day. Anyway, enough of my ramblings. Let's decorate some more How about a wreath for the door?
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Post by IWOmusic on Dec 10, 2008 13:06:21 GMT -5
Nice reads Christine and Steph! Pretty wreath Boston
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Post by cgs2007 on Dec 11, 2008 0:54:09 GMT -5
thanks guys.... i have had some new inspiration as of today to write a new note.... someone from highschool came back into my life today.... and idk if its good yet or not... but so far so good... its just something i have been needing lately... and something i never expected....
"Finally"
Everything i never expected, happened all in one phone call
All that i had been searching for, was now in front of me.
Taking it slow, dont want to rush
Good things come with time, And to the ones who wait
Its my time, I have been waiting.
so please let this be real, give me what i need.
i feel so complete, finally i can breathe.
finally what i want the most, has found me....
finally....
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Post by blueeyz on Dec 11, 2008 12:03:48 GMT -5
Great stuff, Steph and Christine!
Even if the poems get dark and sad, we've got Boston's festive decorations to keep the place looking cheerful.....lol.
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Post by starcrossed on Dec 12, 2008 19:49:27 GMT -5
Lovely work Christine.... Thank you Blue, Iwo and Boston
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Post by starcrossed on Dec 14, 2008 16:26:35 GMT -5
This one started off as a song in my head... so, I went with it So, here is one for the romance department. If you have a good man, then love and treasure him for what he is in your life... Simply AmazingThere isn't anything I want do. Not a single thing I need to say. Every moment that we share, Sings to my soul like a never ending song... Just being with you. Take my hand. Speak no words. Shine so brightly, Across diamond sands. This is it, Through life we will withstand. Simply amazing... You are my only man. Strange, How I never thought that I would find you. Never thought, That I could feel this way. Yet, here I am. This is all so new. You are my everything, Now all I want is to be everything to you. Take my hand. Speak no words. Shine so brightly, Across diamond sands. This is it, Through life we will withstand. Simply amazing... You are my only man. Love, We have nothing to fear. No reason to be afraid of anything, No matter how life may seem unclear. Together we are stronger... Never meant to be apart. Take all that is given... My love. My heart. Take my hand. Speak no words. Shine so brightly, Across diamond sands. This is it, Through life we will withstand. Simply amazing... You are my only man. Simply amazing... You are my man.
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Post by starcrossed on Dec 16, 2008 20:56:17 GMT -5
Wow... it is so quiet in here. Did everyone go Christmas shopping or what? LOL
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Post by IWOmusic on Dec 17, 2008 15:24:49 GMT -5
Very lovely poems Steph and Christine!
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Post by blueeyz on Dec 17, 2008 17:23:41 GMT -5
Wow... it is so quiet in here. Did everyone go Christmas shopping or what? LOL Yeah, pretty much, and school-related Xmas stuff!! Your poem is very sweet, Star. I'll post soon. Got poetry in my head, but can't settle myself down to write it. I need to work on that... -Blue
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