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Post by starcrossed on Apr 30, 2007 0:19:12 GMT -5
I wish you could come Shawna! That would be fun. Reports...will do. I know Jet is bringing her video camera...she is hoping to catch me doing something..like fall off a table from drinking too much...A 'falling star'...LOL I haven't drank in forever. I would fall too. LMAO
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Post by suzy on Apr 30, 2007 0:27:12 GMT -5
Wow. Such beautiful work here. I've been trying to catch up around the org, thank you for your beautiful poetry. Maybe someday I'll be brave enough to share mine, the one I sent to Marty for his birthday.
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Post by starcrossed on Apr 30, 2007 0:37:43 GMT -5
Wow. Such beautiful work here. I've been trying to catch up around the org, thank you for your beautiful poetry. Maybe someday I'll be brave enough to share mine, the one I sent to Marty for his birthday. Thank you Suzy! Feel free to post your work anytime. You don't have to be 'brave' this is a safe place to post. It is a place to be creative! Post whenever you would like to share your work ok? I have not seen you around her in a while! Nice to see you back on the Org. |
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on Apr 30, 2007 0:49:26 GMT -5
I wish you could come Shawna! That would be fun. Reports...will do. I know Jet is bringing her video camera...she is hoping to catch me doing something..like fall off a table from drinking too much...A 'falling star'...LOL I haven't drank in forever. I would fall too. LMAO Boy! I love to see that video!  How many days til HC! 19? Come onnnnnn...get here already! If ya feel a breeze that's us back here wishing you a excellent time! Tell Marty hello for us!  SG |
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Post by starcrossed on Apr 30, 2007 0:57:22 GMT -5
I wish you could come Shawna! That would be fun. Reports...will do. I know Jet is bringing her video camera...she is hoping to catch me doing something..like fall off a table from drinking too much...A 'falling star'...LOL I haven't drank in forever. I would fall too. LMAO Boy! I love to see that video! [img src=" ![]() lovehammersecards.com/MCorg/smilies/dancing6.gif"] [/IMG] How many days til HC! 19? Come onnnnnn...get here already! If ya feel a breeze that's us back here wishing you a excellent time! Tell Marty hello for us! [img src=" ![]() lovehammersecards.com/MCorg/smilies/pic.gif"][/IMG] SG[/quote] That would be funny...   ...I will try my best not to dance on any tables...but, I have not promises on not becoming a "falling star"...I can be clumsy at the worst times...LOL Jet will have it all on camera. I will say "hi" , if I can. Sounds like there will be a lot of fans coming on the trip, and I don't think I stand out  . Unless I am tripping over my feet and falling at the time...  |
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Post by IWOmusic on Apr 30, 2007 1:08:48 GMT -5
An odd favorite from the 80's
Cemetery Gates
A dreaded sunny day
so I meet you at the cemetery gates
Keats and Yeats are on your side
A dreaded sunny day
so I meet you at the cemetery gates
Keats and Yeats are on your side
while Wilde is on mine
So we go inside and we gravely read the stones
all those people all those lives
where are they now ?
with loves, and hates
and passions just like mine
they were born
and then they lived and then they died
which seems so unfair
and I want to cry
You say: "ere thrice the sun hath done salutation to the dawn"
and you claim these words as your own
but I'm well-read, have heard them said
a hundred times (maybe less, maybe more)
if you must write prose/poems
the words you use should be your own
don't plagiarize or take "on loans"
there's always someone, somewhere
with a big nose, who knows
and who trips you up and laughs
when you fall
You say: "ere long done do does did "
words which could only be your own
you then produce the text
from whence was ripped
(some dizzy whore, 1804)
A dreaded sunny day
so let's go where we're happy
so I meet you at the cemetery gates
Keats and Yeats are on your side
A dreaded sunny day
so let's go where we're wanted
so I meet you at the cemetery gates
Keats and Yeats are on your side
but you lose
because Wilde is on mine
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Post by starcrossed on Apr 30, 2007 1:14:57 GMT -5
Hello Iwo! I guess we are on a spooky vibe?...I posted 'Phantoms' and now you posted 'Cemetery Gates' lol... thank you for posting. I enjoyed reading it. Wow! Keats, Yeats, and Wilde...very creative indeed.
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Post by starcrossed on May 1, 2007 1:30:53 GMT -5
For the romantic....  Drop Your SkinDrop your skin... Who you pretend to be. I see your beauty within. You are radiance... Simple and free. Lips... Flooding thoughts... Passionate spirit... Body to body, And mouth to mouth... Feel you inside my heart. I treasure you, And hold you close. My precious love. Complete my puzzle... That lost piece to my exsistance... Your place within my soul. I have nothing of value to offer you, Just my undying love which you already control. |
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 1, 2007 4:46:21 GMT -5
8-)Love all 3 of your newest gems...love the flow and glowing aura coming from the all. WTL-Seeing the beauty in life SB-Feeling apart of the world in all that it has to offer DYS-Search for love to enrich your life. Brilliant SC!  SG |
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Post by starcrossed on May 1, 2007 12:18:33 GMT -5
Hello Shawna! Thank you. I made those a few shorter poems. My style varies at times...long poems or shorter ones. I have a decided on a new project, so i have a lot of work to do today! Wish me good luck!!!
Oh, and love where your story thread is going! You are making such great progress on that, and I can't wait to read more!
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 1, 2007 13:38:58 GMT -5
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Post by LMC on May 1, 2007 14:29:39 GMT -5
This poem I wrote when I was mad so it's kind of angry...
In my head
You're already dead
I want you to know
I hate you so
The things you did to me
You won't let me be
Why'd you have to be in my life?
You won't go away
You're here to stay
Man, you make me so mad
This poem I wrote about moving
There's tears of sadness
No joy
When you pack your bags
And go away
Then Everything you knew
Starts to fade
Into the distance
You don't want to leave everyone you've ever known
You don't want to have to say goodbye
You don't want to go to a place you've never been
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Post by starcrossed on May 1, 2007 16:22:05 GMT -5
Those are great Chelsea! I haven't seen you around here much. Thank you for sharing your work!!! I can see the emotion in them.
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Post by starcrossed on May 1, 2007 16:26:57 GMT -5
I just saw on the news that at the Circus I saw in Whitter Narrow Park...a performer died doing a stunt. That is very sad...  |
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 2, 2007 14:24:05 GMT -5
This is per Star's request:
Here is the song/poem wrote in Chapter 5 of Gypsy Boys Chronicles:
River of Dreams
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The skies will open up today and bring with it the month of May..
She turned as if to say will there be any love here today?
River of Dreams come bring me your song...of love and life I pray..
Sing it to me those sweet melodies..may her siren soul keep me at ease.
Life will bring us light that's here to stay and if you come here for love to trade..The love will never escape through the blue haze.
River of Dreams come bring your song....of love and life is what I pray..
And this time may you stay...come what may...come what may..
The love you gave can never be exchanged for the light saved for us is here to play within your heart is what i pray..
River of Dreams come sing me a song full of peace that will remain..
'til my dying day...'til my dying day..your love is here to stay for the love in my heart is engraved with your spirit and your gaze.
Please my love come here to stay..love me 'til my dying day.. come what may.
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Post by starcrossed on May 2, 2007 18:15:31 GMT -5
Thank You Shawna!!!! I love the flow of the song...it really does read like a poem!
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 2, 2007 23:56:21 GMT -5
Here a new song/poem I just wrote tonight.
Memories of Light
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Rain fell upon his soft velvet skin that seemed to melt into the sea blue skies above.
Come around to see me
Come around to hold me
Come embrace the love you told me would last forever.
Images of you still haunt my dreams tonight..will you feel me holding you tight.
The light of your aura cast a bright blue image across my soul of the love consuming the hole in my heart out of control.
Bring me your heart..
Bring me your soul..
Bring me the part of your heart and I will never depart.
Fly with me sweet angel of my heart and always from the start.
Melt into me sweetness of light..
I could not fight the love consuming me tonight.
May your light of life last for all time....bring your light to me now..come now..consume my core of peace and serenity.
Come to me...come bring me the warmth of your love now and forever.
Your light will hold me near...never full of fear or tears.
Our love will fuse together forever.
Hold me now...Hold me...Hold me now.
Thank you for your passion and solid compassion which will never just be a fashion.
May you always love have me in your sight and be full of flight and with all it's might.
You are my heart for all time...
Your light of sweet flight..come rest with me tonight.
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IWOmusic
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Post by IWOmusic on May 3, 2007 0:22:10 GMT -5
Sunflowergypsy, it has a vibe of a prayer, very cool |
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Post by Sunflower Gypsy on May 3, 2007 0:46:57 GMT -5
[/IMG] [/quote] Thank you...my muse decided to give some serious good vibes tonight...and this is what came out. Lots about love and serenity. Glad ya liked it!  peace SG(Shawna) |
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Post by starcrossed on May 3, 2007 1:10:19 GMT -5
Shawna!!!! This is perfect! I really am amazed by your growing creativity!!!Thank you for sharing this!!!! ~Big Hug~
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